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Source: Vietnamese Folk Tales

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In the ancient days when dragons still soared through Vietnamese skies and the boundary between the mortal and divine realms was thin as morning mist, there lived a small golden carp named Kim in the peaceful waters of Hồ Tây, the West Lake near the imperial capital.

Kim was not an ordinary fish. While other carp were content to swim lazily in the shallow waters, eating water plants and enjoying the gentle currents, Kim possessed an insatiable curiosity about the world beyond the lake. She would often swim to the surface and watch the clouds drift overhead, wondering what lay beyond the distant mountains.

“Why do you always swim alone near the surface?” asked her friend Bạc, a silver carp who preferred the safety of the deeper waters. “It’s dangerous up there. The fishermen’s nets await careless fish, and the great birds hunt from above.”

“I dream of seeing what lies beyond our little lake,” Kim replied, her golden scales shimmering in the sunlight that filtered through the water. “Surely there must be more to existence than swimming in circles and hiding from shadows.”

One day, as Kim floated near the surface lost in her dreams, she overheard a conversation between two elderly fishermen sitting on the shore.

“Grandfather,” said the younger man, “tell me again the story of the Dragon Gate.”

The old fisherman smiled and cast his line into the water. “Ah, child, it is said that far to the north, where the great mountains touch the sky, there flows a river so swift and powerful that it has carved a passage through solid stone. At the end of this passage stands the legendary Dragon Gate—a waterfall so high and fierce that it seems to fall from heaven itself.”

“And what happens at this Dragon Gate?” the young man asked, though Kim could tell he had heard this story many times before.

“Legend says that any carp brave enough and strong enough to swim upstream against the impossible current and leap over the Dragon Gate will be transformed into a mighty dragon, able to soar through the clouds and command the wind and rain.”

Kim’s heart leaped with excitement. A way to escape the confines of the lake and achieve something truly magnificent! But her joy was tempered by the old man’s next words.

“Of course, no fish has ever succeeded. The journey is far too dangerous, and the waterfall far too high. It is merely a beautiful dream, impossible to achieve.”

That night, Kim could not sleep. She swam restlessly through the dark waters, her mind filled with visions of the Dragon Gate and the transformation that awaited beyond it. By morning, her decision was made.

“I am going to attempt the journey to the Dragon Gate,” she announced to her friends.

The other fish were horrified. “Kim, you cannot be serious!” exclaimed Bạc. “The journey would take you through treacherous rivers filled with predators. Even if you survived that, the Dragon Gate waterfall is said to be impossibly high. You would surely die in the attempt.”

“Perhaps,” Kim admitted, “but I would rather die pursuing a noble dream than live safely without purpose. I cannot spend my life wondering ‘what if.’”

Despite her friends’ pleas and warnings, Kim began preparing for her journey. She practiced swimming against the strongest currents in the lake, building her strength and endurance. She studied the patterns of water flow and learned to read the subtle signs that indicated hidden dangers.

When she felt ready, Kim bid farewell to her friends and began her journey upstream. The first river was wider and swifter than anything she had ever experienced. The current was so strong that for every three strokes forward, she was pushed two strokes back. But Kim had expected this and had trained for exactly such conditions.

Day after day, she swam upstream, resting only when exhaustion threatened to sweep her away. Other fish she met along the way thought she was mad.

“Little carp,” called a wise old catfish from his hiding place among the river rocks, “turn back while you still can. I have lived in these waters for fifty years, and I have seen many young fish attempt this foolish journey. None have ever returned.”

“Then I will be the first,” Kim replied, continuing her struggle against the relentless current.

As she traveled further upstream, the challenges multiplied. Rapids that could dash her against the rocks, predatory fish that hunted in the turbulent waters, and fishermen who cast their nets in the narrow passages where she was forced to swim near the surface.

Weeks turned into months. Kim’s golden scales became scarred from encounters with sharp rocks and close calls with predators. Her fins were torn from the constant battle against the current. Sometimes she would make an entire day’s progress only to be swept back by a sudden flood or trapped in a backwater that led nowhere.

Many times, Kim considered turning back. The comfortable life in Hồ Tây seemed like paradise compared to the daily struggle for survival in these wild waters. But each time she wavered, she would remember her dream of transformation and find the strength to continue.

“I may fail,” she told herself during the darkest moments, “but I will not give up. Every stroke upstream is a stroke toward my dream.”

Finally, after months of arduous travel, Kim heard it—the thunderous roar of falling water that could only be the legendary Dragon Gate. As she rounded the final bend in the river, the sight took her breath away.

The waterfall was even more magnificent and terrifying than the stories had described. It rose from the pool below like a column of liquid crystal, so high that its top was lost in the clouds above. The force of the falling water created a mist so thick that rainbows danced in the air around it.

At the base of the waterfall was a pool crowded with hundreds of carp—fish who had made the same journey Kim had completed, but who now swam in endless circles, afraid to attempt the final, impossible leap.

“Sister,” called one of them, “you have made it this far, which is farther than most ever dream. But look at that waterfall! It is suicide to attempt such a leap. Better to live here in this pool, honored for having come so far.”

Kim studied the waterfall carefully. It was indeed impossibly high, and the force of the falling water would batter any fish that tried to swim up it. But as she watched, she noticed something that the other carp had missed.

Along one side of the waterfall, where the rocks created a slight overhang, the water fell less forcefully. There, perhaps, a fish with enough speed and perfect timing might find a path upward.

“I have not come this far to turn back now,” Kim announced to the assembled carp. “I will attempt the leap.”

The other fish tried to dissuade her, sharing stories of countless attempts that had ended in death. But Kim’s mind was made up. She spent three days studying the waterfall’s patterns, timing the moments when the current was weakest, planning her approach with mathematical precision.

On the fourth morning, as the sun rose over the mountains and painted the waterfall with golden light, Kim began her final attempt. She swam to the far end of the pool and turned toward the waterfall, building speed with powerful strokes of her fins.

Faster and faster she swam, using every technique she had learned during her long journey. As she hit the base of the waterfall, she launched herself upward with all her might, following the narrow path she had observed along the rocky overhang.

The force of the falling water was tremendous. It battered her from all sides, threatening to dash her against the rocks or sweep her back into the pool below. Her vision blurred from the impact, and her strength began to fail.

But Kim had not come so far to be defeated now. Drawing upon reserves of determination she didn’t know she possessed, she pressed upward, stroke by stroke, leap by leap. Sometimes she would fall back several feet, but she would gather herself and try again.

The other carp watched from below in amazement. Never had they seen such determination, such refusal to accept defeat. Some began to cheer her on, their voices barely audible over the roar of the water.

Higher and higher Kim climbed, her scarred fins cutting through the cascading water, her golden scales gleaming with effort. Just when it seemed she could go no further, she spotted something above her—the top of the waterfall, and beyond it, the open sky.

With one final, desperate surge of energy, Kim launched herself through the last curtain of falling water and soared into the air above the Dragon Gate.

In that moment of triumph, as she hung suspended between earth and sky, a miraculous transformation began. Kim felt her scales shifting and changing, growing larger and more brilliant. Her fins extended and became powerful wings. Her whiskers lengthened into flowing dragon’s beard, and her body stretched and became serpentine and graceful.

When the transformation was complete, Kim had become a magnificent golden dragon, as beautiful and powerful as any that had ever soared through Vietnamese skies. She could feel the ancient magic flowing through her transformed body, granting her dominion over wind and cloud, rain and storm.

The carp below watched in wonder as their former companion circled overhead, her dragon form glittering in the sunlight like a creature made of living gold.

“Sister!” they called up to her. “You have achieved the impossible! What wisdom can you share with us?”

The dragon that had once been Kim descended until she hovered just above the pool. Her voice, now deep and resonant with divine power, carried to every fish below.

“The Dragon Gate does not transform those who leap over it,” she said. “It reveals the transformation that has already taken place within. Every stroke I swam upstream, every obstacle I overcame, every time I chose to continue when stopping would have been easier—these were the moments when I truly became a dragon. The Gate merely showed me what I had already become through perseverance and determination.”

With those words, she soared into the sky and disappeared into the clouds, leaving behind a legacy that would inspire generations of Vietnamese people.

From that day forward, the story of Kim the carp spread throughout Vietnam. Parents would tell it to their children to teach them that any goal, no matter how impossible it might seem, could be achieved through determination, hard work, and refusal to give up in the face of obstacles.

The tale became especially beloved by students and scholars, who saw in Kim’s journey a metaphor for their own struggles to master difficult subjects and achieve academic success. They would often hang pictures of carp swimming upstream in their study rooms, reminding themselves that persistence and dedication could transform them from ordinary students into scholars worthy of respect.

And they say that even today, when Vietnamese people face seemingly impossible challenges, they remember the story of Kim the carp and find the strength to continue swimming upstream, knowing that true transformation comes not from magic, but from the determination never to give up on their dreams.

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